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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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There are no words In space, Or that’s where they are kept? Because words We can’t erase Like days We only wept There is no love In heart, Or that’s where it’s all found? Because words May tear apart From space The lack of sound There is no faith In trust, Or that’s where it is known? Because words May be a must But space Is overgrown There is no hope In us, There seemed to be so much? But these words Might help discuss Like space An icy touch [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
There is no faith In trust, Or that’s where it is known? Because words May be a must But space Is overgrown There is no hope In us, There seemed to be so much? But these words Might help discuss Like space An icy touch Good one, WOW! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a good friend said to me "hope is the last thing to die" I believe him! |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Marvelously penned. the first stanza really pulled me in. great as always. Get a nightlife. ____ /__ *** \ / / \ O / \ / || || _||_ [This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well penned but I hope you are wrong and hope is what I have, hope in my faith, or is it faith that gives me hope...chicken or egg, hope/faith |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its the narrators thoughts not mine o yuh and thankies |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Your narrator huh? Well I wouldnt want to give up any of these...they are all I have some days ya know? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Walt, I don't know what to say except that this is very well penned Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ What a ponderous piece .... 'words We can’t erase Like days We only wept' This struck me so deeply .... Thank you ... or the 'narrator'.  *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, powerful penning here, Walt. You never cease to amaze me.  All writing comes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all big smiles yuh |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Yes, narrator indeed. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walt sweetie ya penned another goody 4Us2read... yuh me likez this bunches *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yuh O Yuh, me likes Walty Ole' buddy Ole' Pal. Seriously Walty, wonderfully penned. Maree |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- This is excellent! What an extremely powerful write. Love it! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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PoetryLuvR Junior Member
since 2001-07-27
Posts 16Ca, USA |
Wow, awesome piece of art. I loved it...really hit me. Great job! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Darn now I have some thinking to do! Great job Walt! Yuh! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
"There are in the end three things that last: faith, hope, and love, and the greatest of these is love" (1 Cor 13:13) |
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