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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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0 posted 2001-07-15 12:49 PM


We really get
stumped at the time
of month ,when moon and
sun are having their run, across
blue skies flying, they seem to
be sighing, for both do seem to
take up space, while running
the race, but when all is done
at end of day, the moon
will laugh and con-
tinue  to stay



[This message has been edited by Logan (edited 07-15-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-07-15 12:55 PM


I will soon be howling at the moon like a bad dog! shaking my head here...you guys crack me up!  
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2 posted 2001-07-15 01:12 AM



LOL !
~You do NOT want
me to write menophasal moon
Not now in July ~ or even in June
Not in the phasing of monthly moon
gazing ~ not in the heat of the noon
In softest array I've put her away
until August comes around ... then
in the glow of love I will show
that she is a heart trace
away from winning the
the race ~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

vlraynes
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3 posted 2001-07-15 01:17 AM



Logan-
   LOL...you two are cracking me up tonight!  
   Thanks for the giggles...LOL
   Love this little ditty..

   ~vicky


Logan
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4 posted 2001-07-15 01:17 AM


Awww, Serenity, stick around, who knows what the mad ones will do next..LOL...thanks for being here to see my downfall...very gentle smile

Loved it all, Marge, just like I love you for your quick wit and for having a bit of fun with me tonight..I throw up my hands and bow to the moongirl...very very gentle smile

Logan
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5 posted 2001-07-15 01:19 AM


Vicky, I hope you giggled as much as Marge and I have tonight..thank you for being here..gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-07-15 01:03 PM


All I have to say, is OF COURSE the moon wins.  
Sandra

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
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7 posted 2001-07-15 02:50 PM


Moonshine, moonshine, look my face is glowing. The moon always wins and I end up snoreing.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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8 posted 2001-07-15 06:30 PM


My goodness...Menopausal Moon!!!This I gotta see.  Logan, you have created a monster in Marge, she is out of control now!  Oh, but I love to see writers having fun, and thank you for sharing your laughter with us.

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2001-07-15 08:55 PM


This one bounds with quick wit and playfulness.  I like this side of you, my friend.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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