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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-11 05:54 PM



Your Color

when everything
seems so
flat and black
in the distance
I see
your color
then I
relax and
get my
breath back
and somehow
the black seems
much smaller

picture provided by Bernie Slicker


"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-11-2001).]

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-08-11 05:56 PM


Very nicely said, Helen.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2001-08-11 06:07 PM


WOW do I recognize this feeling.
Real nice poem, thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Rindercella
Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64
La La Land
3 posted 2001-08-13 05:27 PM


This is a very nice poem.
Nice photo too.

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
4 posted 2001-08-13 05:33 PM


The soul flies to a familiar that the heart clings to... and then every thing feels much better.
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-13 05:38 PM


quickly I cling
to the colors
as evening falls
and day changes
from work clothes
to cocktail attire

reaching for you
I find the hues
of myself shift
and I once again
am blue


hope you don't mind... ( smiling) just inspired me to reply in kind...

very nice work you do...


1slippery_lady
Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20
Ohio, USA
6 posted 2001-08-14 11:16 PM


Your poems are as beautiful as the pics that accompany them Slickster.  
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