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Open Poetry #15

I’d like to say…

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-11 09:19 AM

I’d like to say…

I’d like to say…

I love you
but the words
might come out
contrite
and everything
I say to you
I want to sound
just right
then I could
use words like
want and need
but this
you already
know
so I shall
love you
in my silence
a voice
a heart
shows
for eyes
have a language
a heart
understands
I know the truth
each time
you touch my
hand

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-08-11 09:45 AM

1 slick_lady,
Well done, nice flow, enjoyed.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-11 10:19 AM

OneSlickLady~
Well ... you said it very well~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-11 10:40 AM

you say it very well. . .

great job helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-08-11 10:55 AM

No words needed...
Helen,
you write quite well... I always look forward to reading your posts

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-08-11 02:06 PM

sometimes you dont need the words you know it is there, this is wonderful, Helen.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

6 posted 2001-08-11 04:18 PM

wow....that reads so beautifully!

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

7 posted 2001-08-11 05:17 PM

Always amazing Helen.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-08-11 06:12 PM

Sigh, simply beautiful verse, Helen.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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