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Martie

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0 posted 2001-08-09 09:24 PM

Love me Like There is no Tomorrow

Remember when we were new
you loved me with freckles and pale skin
in the splash of discovery
you dripped your blond laughter into my desperate
and I curved around your enthusiasm
throwing away buckets of gone by
for you loved me like there was no yesterday.

We have become a cloth now
intricate and fragile with time
threaded with this dawn and dusk
where we have built trust

I can hear you playing in my head
long after together has bathed us
and even when I sleep I reach across the gorge
that takes you flying somewhere else
and touch your bruised remember
that sleeps with us

Cumbersome life weighs on our wings now
and takes our wonder like a soft blue egg
and threatens to just let it lay
in chambers where no joy is made
and the wings beat us down to cower
in the fear of how

Love me like there is no tomorrow
darling lock me into seasons spring
whisper your breathe on curving ever
where the circle in our ring
begins and ends

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-09-2001).]

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

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Michigan

1 posted 2001-08-09 09:29 PM

Beautiful poem Martie.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-08-09 09:41 PM

Oh Martie, Martie, Martie, this is YOU, this is fabulous writing as everything you do is b ut this, this is passionate!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-08-09 09:49 PM

Martie, this is so refreshing and beautiful!

I love your style~

Melissa~

Sunshine

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4 posted 2001-08-09 10:17 PM

What I see is you growing in your writing like there's no tomorrow!

catalinamoon

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5 posted 2001-08-09 10:45 PM

So sweet, Martie. This speaks of a growing and special love. Nice write.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-08-10 12:14 PM

Martie, if I loved you, there would BE no tomorrow!! Your hubby would whomp me bad!!!

(but it's a nice thought...and a terrific poem

)

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2001-08-10 12:30 PM

Martie~
You just rock !

'Love me like there is no tomorrow
darling lock me into seasons spring
whisper your breathe on curving ever
where the circle in our ring
begins and ends'

Yep .... round and round~
Love ya', poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

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8 posted 2001-08-10 02:09 AM

Martie, you make me feel like a pretend poet. This is just beautiful from beginning to end. I'm gonna go eat dirt now. sigh.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
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9 posted 2001-08-10 02:17 AM

Ahhh, Martie, Martie, you sing with your words, girl..very very nice..very gentle smile

Mysteria

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10 posted 2001-08-10 03:07 AM

Martie - this poem was second best to feeling that new baby's bottom for the very first time! Now I am not going to explain that to you, I am going to wait until you experience that feeling and then you will know just how absolutely wonderful this poetry was!

To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-08-10 05:34 AM

Really enjoyed this Martie...James

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-08-10 12:36 PM

Remember when we were new
you loved me with freckles and pale skin
in the splash of discovery
you dripped your blond laughter into my desperate
and I curved around your enthusiasm
throwing away buckets of gone by
for you loved me like there was no yesterday.

We have become a cloth now
intricate and fragile with time
threaded with this dawn and dusk
where we have built trust

I can hear you playing in my head
long after together has bathed us
and even when I sleep I reach across the gorge
that takes you flying somewhere else
and touch your bruised remember
that sleeps with us
======================================
whisper your breathe on curving ever
where the circle in our ring
begins and ends
====================================

OH MAN!!!! *shaking my head*

Marge is right you just ROCK...
and I know just how Constance feels(LOL@her reply)
(and Balladeer) he needs a good whomping

Martie this is just awesome...
Gawwwwd I love the way your poetic mind works...
What a beautiful, sincere poem of marriage, and commitment over time.
both the poem and the inspire leave me with poetic envy...
Order me up a dirt sandwich

very very cool write me girlie

me

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2001-08-10 12:54 PM

Martie,
You just flew over the coo coo's nest with butterfly wings. Love ya Sy

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2001-08-11 10:36 PM

Remember when we were new
you loved me with freckles and pale skin
in the splash of discovery
you dripped your blond laughter into my desperate
and I curved around your enthusiasm
throwing away buckets of gone by
for you loved me like there was no yesterday.

I have no words to describe how your writing makes me feel Martie.

this is going into my library

Maree

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

15 posted 2001-08-12 09:16 AM

                "you dripped your blond laughter into my desperate
                 and I curved around your enthusiasm
                 throwing away buckets of gone by
                 for you loved me like there was no yesterday."

What a wonderful start love prepares for us all! As the seasons pass our perspective changes and our goals run astray but are always a form of new!

              "Love me like there is no tomorrow
               darling lock me into seasons spring
               whisper your breathe on curving ever
               where the circle in our ring
               begins and ends"

This clever ending is a delight to the reader as he /she recalls and wishes upon yesterday!

Wonderful writing!!    As usual!!

Denise

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16 posted 2001-08-12 07:57 PM

WOW! This is fantastic, Martie!

snowpants
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KS

17 posted 2001-08-12 10:50 PM

'I can hear you playing in my head
long after together has bathed us
and even when I sleep I reach across the gorge
that takes you flying somewhere else
and touch your bruised remember
that sleeps with us'

Your imagery is just outstanding, Martie...this is one excellent write...I truly enjoyed this!! Beautiful illustration of devotion...

sp

no power in creation,
no mortal complication,
will ever stop me from being with you...

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