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Afternoon Rain,
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Afternoon Rain, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sitting on a rocking chair, By a window, Looking at the falling rain, It Is so dark and cold, I could hear calling wispers through the blowing wind, And you always are my mind, It Is cold and dark afternoon, The rain falling harder , An afternoon rain, The music Is on my radio, you were singing a song, That reminded me of the memories, The memories of this falling rain An afternoon rain, Looking at the those dark clouds, knowing that would bring me down, down and low, With these empty memories, Without love, that shared my dreams away, An afternoon rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Sometimes the rain washes everything away. Enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this reads like a song...very nice  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the rain has the same effect on me... beautiful bittersweet write Vandana well done I know no one is to blame |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ I wish you a rainbow ... after the rain~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmmm. . . rain and music seem to be the topics of the day. . . great job my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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