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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-03 12:05 PM

~*~

silver plating light
surrounding takes up all night
moonglowing delight

~*~

soft, moon's insistence
open eyes and pan silver
striking golden fire

~*~

desire is breezing
moonglowing is now easing
sunbeams twinkle in

~*~

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

1 posted 2001-08-03 12:14 PM

Your pen has painted delightful images.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2001-08-03 12:14 PM

moonglowing is now easing
sunbeams twinkle in

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A lovely write.......

I quite enjoyed it......

Thank you
**************************

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-03 12:37 PM

breezing desire warmed
sun's rays exciting this pair
enraptured morning

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[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 08-05-2001).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-08-05 12:55 PM

Luminescent words
shining forth from heart to pen
with dazzle of moon

I love these 'moon' senryus

Well expressed, lady!~

Melissa~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-05 02:35 PM

LadyInWhite~
And, of course, you had no idea
that I would find the glow so charming !

Lovely, lovely, lovely ... all three~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-08-05 11:45 PM

Love the reference to silver and gold....hmmm, off I go! That was lovely.

~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~
~* Mysteria *~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-08-06 12:05 PM

beautiful...wish i could write this style this well

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2001-08-06 12:15 PM

Moonglow was never so beautiful dear Lady In White...I too wish I could write like so.

jwesley

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-08-09 11:36 PM

Lady In White-
   Lovely as always..
   You write these so beautifully.
   Much enjoyed.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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