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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-08-02 11:58 AM


When it comes to love tread lightly
watch every step that you take,
don't rush yourself into anything
think about decisions that you make.

Is it what you want really want
and is it what you really need?
Do not do things in haste
nor set your heart up to bleed.

If you should fall in love
just nourish it with care,
make sure  you find someone
who is truly willing to share.

Make sure their willing to give all
don't settle for just a part,
and REMEMBER to tread lightly
before you give away your heart!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-02 12:00 PM


good advice..and perhaps we should all tread lightly no matter what the endevor...and use a bit of judgement and caution as we go...

good write.. I enjoyed

Terryloveiris_85
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 61
The middle of nowhere
2 posted 2001-08-02 12:42 PM


wow. i really liked this. it reminded me of my situation right now. awesome job.
~iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-08-02 01:18 PM


Very wise and wonderful verse. I will keep this. This is lovingly done with a great message.
Sincerely,
Regina

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2001-08-02 07:21 PM


Words of wisdom indeed!!  If only when that moment came we could all remember to do just that......." Tread Lightly".  Wonderful verse and without a doubt one worth listening to.
shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
5 posted 2001-08-02 07:25 PM


Well written with great advice, thank you

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2001-08-02 07:50 PM



A lovely poem with much truth and sincerity  

Melissa~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-08-03 12:03 PM


Now if I could just listen to my own advice!!
Thanks all.  *s*  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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