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Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-02 03:59 AM

Goodnight, goodnight, sweet one,
it’s time to go to bed.
How may kisses does it take
while you can still hold up your head?
I’ll sing you one more lullaby
with words and tune unclear,
leaning as close as I can
to whisper it in your ear.
With your eyes half closed
and your smile that says so much,
I know you’re in a far off land
full of dreams and such.

Sweet dreams, my sweet one

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-02 06:51 AM

Dee~
How adorably sweet~
I love lullabies !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-02 08:42 AM

lovely... just the thing for a lullaby..

I enjoyed

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-02 08:59 AM

You sing a sweet song here Dee..
what a lovely gem this is...great rhyme flow,
this was a treat to read aloud...
so good to see you posting again too

take care
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-08-02 11:48 AM

How precious!

Melissa~

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2001-08-02 05:00 PM

Just the thing for a grandbaby on the way?
Thank you all.
JM, it's good to be back writing too.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

maeve
Member

since 2001-08-01

Posts 139
In the Outback

6 posted 2001-08-02 08:10 PM

A sweet song for a sweet child I am sure.

Maeve

Take me back to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-08-02 09:33 PM

I can hear the melody Dee. . .

softly wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2001-08-02 10:51 PM

Dee
This was so beautifully written, I loved every word. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2001-08-03 01:05 AM

This is so sweet, it sure will sing me to sleep...

Loved every word.

Parker

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2001-08-03 03:08 AM

Maeve, Sven and Sue, thank you, glad you liked it

Parker, close your eyes and I'll try and sing it for you.

Ok guys! honest opinion time please...should the second and third stanza be reversed? I'm not sure if they would sound better that way.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

11 posted 2001-08-03 10:47 AM

Well, I think it works both ways... as long as your whispering it in my ear...

Parker

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