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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-07-31 02:14 PM


This will feel so very strange
you not being here anymore,
no more good morning dear
or smile when I walk in the door.
Maybe this will work for the best
now that you've gone your own way
when the sun comes up tomorrow
it will shine on a brand new day.
Now each and every day will seem
so very different, yes it's true
and I will sit back and smile
and my thoughts will drift away~
to you.


(For a dear friend who changed jobs
today.  GOOD LUCK, YOU WILL BE MISSED)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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1 posted 2001-07-31 02:16 PM


Wonderful tribute to a friend.  Well written.

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Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2001-07-31 02:46 PM


With such a wonderful tribute,
I'm sure you eased the way,
Well done.

Gloom

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3 posted 2001-07-31 03:06 PM


GentleSpirit~
What a wonderful gift to give~
Best of luck to your friend~
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-07-31 05:15 PM


nicely done..I hope they got to read it..


BloomingRose
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5 posted 2001-07-31 05:57 PM


Sweet of you to write this lovely tribute.

Deb

JLR
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6 posted 2001-07-31 06:03 PM


Such heartfelt words...enjoyed!
vandana
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7 posted 2001-08-01 05:25 PM


very nice
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-08-01 06:20 PM


Touching tribute, I hope your friend does well.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-08-01 06:55 PM


I know how this is. . . well done GS. . .



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Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2001-08-01 08:12 PM


Thank you all.  Today was just not the same, it felt so very lonely.  Thanks again.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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