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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2001-07-28 11:45 PM




Hush, hush, Mommy’s not mad
It’s just that Daddy made her sad
That’s not your “Auntie” he kissed goodnight
But don’t you worry. We’ll be all right.

No honey-bun we’re not moving away
Daddy is going somewhere else to play
Kiss him good-bye you’ll see him soon
(Like when diamonds fall from the moon).

No officer, I don’t know where he could be
We always were so very happy
Sweetie-pie get away from the cement
I’m sorry sir, I don’t know where he went.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 2001 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-07-28 11:55 PM


This is so sad,
but the flow is terrific.
This is very well done.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2001-07-29 12:04 PM


OOOHHhhhhhhhhhhhhh LMAO....uh huh...revenge is sweet....write your name in the wet cement
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2001-07-29 08:20 AM


Cute. You're such a good mother- keeping your children clean. LOL.

Melton

azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
4 posted 2001-07-29 10:22 AM


~giggles~  Wrtieing my name in the wet cement...hmmm...how fun!  I am a good mom huh??!!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2001-07-29 02:46 PM


Sounds like the future's been solidified...  Now I wonder if the kid will grow up to be a rock-star...?

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

azblond
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The Steamy Desert
6 posted 2001-07-29 04:11 PM


~LOL~

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