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Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97


0 posted 2001-07-28 06:04 PM


Thoughts of a new life
fill my head
no cries or
worries and
not a drop of doubt

Nothing to hold me
back and make me
cry out like a baby
when times get
rough

none of that
negativity
getting
in my way
no nonsense in
my new life

no need for dreaming
my dreams would be
reality
and I would have
no regrets

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-28 06:13 PM


feelings easily felt

yet, I don't think that is life, Trina

I enjoyed the feel of this, though, and could identify with the longing/melancholy---you showed it well

azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert
2 posted 2001-07-28 06:24 PM


I feel your hope, but don't forget without dreams, we live in a void.....

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
3 posted 2001-07-28 10:48 PM


Unfortunately, we can't run away from what our life really is. All we can do is attempt to make it better.

Betty Lou Hebert

ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
4 posted 2001-07-28 10:54 PM


This has a positive and self-affirming ring to it.  It would be nice to move ahead in this way and forget all the unpleasant things.

ShannonM

Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

5 posted 2001-07-29 03:12 PM


Yes it really would be nice , dreams are nice sometimes but I don't dream for too long. I can't run from what my life really is but if I feel like dreaming or writing what I really wish my life was like then I must do so if it can take my mind off the unpleasant things in my life even for a little while. Thank you all for reading.

Take care,

Trina

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