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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2001-08-27 01:45 PM

My heart has no where to go
My soul only knows how to bleed
Since you left me
Eventually I know I'll move on
And eventually I'll no longer cry
When the radio constantly reminds me of you
When they play our song
Wicked are my feelings
Slowly killing my sanity
I'm down on my knees
In constant prayer
That this pain would stop eating me
I sometimes wake up in the middle of the night
Crying out your name
Longing to hear "I love you" once again
But I need to get a grip on reality
And face the cold hard truth
That we just weren't meant to be
We met at the wrong time
And met up in the place....

"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

1 posted 2001-08-27 01:55 PM

Ah that was really sad but I liked it alot.
It was really good..Hope yer ok!

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-08-27 03:04 PM

What place?? The last line kinda confused me. Maybe I read it wrong, but oh well. You expressed yourself very nicely here. Thanks for the great read!

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-09-01 03:55 AM

Very sad poem and I hope you are ok but anyway great poem and keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-09-02 01:47 AM

No No Heavens Tears...The last line confused me too.
But I loved the poem. It really captured your pain/heart ache/emotion. And Damn I know the feeling...Ecspecially the mean old radio line....I swear I think the radio people are plotting against me. Anyway, I hope all gets better with you soon. I loved this piece! I hope to see more from you very soon!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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