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Teen Poetry #5

Senicle Ways

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-30 01:42 PM

Rivers run smooth with the color red,
Tell me now what's dancing in your head.
Blotches of red stain the floor,
Footsteps going towards the door.
Before you can see,
It's already starting to flee.
Sinister laughing in the distance,
Makes you ponder your own existance.
Gasping for breath makes you wonder why,
Someone had to have fallen from the sky.
Yellow tape around the house,
Not a sound even from a mouse.
Witnesses can't comprehend,
A helping hand they should lend.
Why must it be Sinicle Ways?
Long to end them all of the days.
But a man chose to freeze in a senicle abyss.

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

1 posted 2001-08-30 02:25 PM

oooooooooooooo i like i like i like.. keep em coming..!!!

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-09-01 04:01 AM

Your poem is very well written I loved it.
Lauren

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-09-02 01:44 AM

Damn Kyle...Each piece I'm reading of yours just keeps getting better and better.... I loved this!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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