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Teen Poetry #5

The past has gone

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-08-27 10:17 AM

The powerful glow
of the moonlit river,
darkened by the shadow
of you and I.
The whispered echo
of your kiss
anticipating the
sound of your heartbeat.
The frosty edge
of the frozen lake
reflecting the clouds
into a mirror
of dreams.
Endless nights
together
under the starlit sky
wondering if this was forever?

It wasn't
for now the past has gone
and these memories are no longer ours
nor yours
but mine.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-08-27 03:07 PM

This was great. I really really like the ending. I hope that everything works out OK for you. *HUGZ*

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

2 posted 2001-08-27 04:33 PM

I loved the ending too. The entire poem was well written and I loved the detail of the lake. Great job!

"Make your life like toiletpaper - long and useful."
"When 2+2 is 5 or less, it's time to question common sense."

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

3 posted 2001-08-29 06:27 PM

Thankyou! *hugs you too* Just letting you know that I am fine and that the poem doesn't pertain to me, its just thoughts which I have gathered from analysing other peopls when they have just broken up with their love, it is a hard time to forget.

^*~Kicking Kim~*^