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Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-08-02 12:48 PM

Dear dad,

Where ever you are, I miss you so much.
Tears coming rolling down my eyes
Because I don’t have you anymore

My heart is broken into so many pieces
That you wouldn’t understand
You mean so much to me

Now you’re in heaven
I saw your wallet
I forget what you look like

No one understands the pain
I am going threw
People hurt my feelings

Sometimes I think of you
And wonder what you’re doing
I miss you so much

Dad I love you so much
You’re in heaven with angels dancing around you
Or you’re resting in piece

Love,

Minna

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2001-08-02 12:53 PM

awwwww im gonna cry!
this was so sad...im sorry about your dad!
*hugz*
good poem

"I have no never-again, I have no always"
Pablo Nerudo

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-08-02 02:20 PM

Go back and fix the last line. It's peace, not piece. HeHe- I do that ALL the time... I write "right" instead of "write" or whatever. hehe. ANYWAY.
The poem- Another heartfelt piece from you. I enjoyed it alot. I can't even imagine how you must feel. You've been placed with one hell of an obstacle...You'll make it through though. Wonderful write here!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-08-03 06:04 PM

Aww hey this was so sad.....I hope things get better Minna.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-08-03 06:11 PM

sad...and VERY touching piece...i wish you the best, Minna...i truly do.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-04 06:58 PM

Oh wow... Very sad, Minna. I'm sorry that you have to live without your dad. *hugs* Stay strong, sweetie. I really liked this poem... filled with emotion and honestly.. NIcely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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