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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-07-29 05:11 PM


You’re eyes are bluer than blue
Sliding gently by.
You’re skin is softer than dug
Rising so high.

It feels so good when I look at you
It feels so good when you hold me
Time changes but,
You will always be the same to me.

My heart only beats for you
Your tears are my life.
My heart only beats for you
You’re always by my side.
My heart only beats for you
Your soul are my eyes.
My heart only beats for you
Your mind are my light.
My heart only beats for you.

Your sweet love are my heaven
Flouting on passion.
Your sweet voice are my defends
Uh just imagine.

It feels so good when I look at you
It feels so good when you hold me
Time changes but,
You will always be the same to me.

My heart only beats for you
Your tears are my life.
My heart only beats for you
You’re always by my side.
My heart only beats for you
Your soul are my eyes.
My heart only beats for you
Your mind are my light.
My heart only beats for you.

Ta da da da, Ta da da da da dap.
Ta da da da, Ta da da da da da dap.
My heart only beats for you
Ta da da da, Ta da da da da dap
Ta da da da, Ta da da da da da dap.
My heart only beats for you
Ta da da da da da da dap.

My heart only beats for you
Your tears are my life.
My heart only beats for you
You’re always by my side.
My heart only beats for you
Your soul are my eyes.
My heart only beats for you
Your mind are my light.
My heart only beats for you.

My heart only beats for you
Your tears are my life.
My heart only beats for you
You’re always by my side.
My heart only beats for you
Your soul are my eyes.
My heart only beats for you
Your mind are my light.
My heart only beats for you.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-29 06:21 PM


This sounds like a good acoustic love song. That ta-da stuff kinda weirded me out, but I thought it'd fit nicely in a song. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
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2 posted 2001-07-29 09:06 PM


Very sweet love song. I agree- it would be an awesome acoustic song. All love songs are the best when acoustic. HeHe... To me at least. Anyway- Off I go! Thanks for the read.  
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3 posted 2001-08-04 01:24 AM


I agree with Jesa, acoustic works best with love songs.  Very nicely done, I really enjoyed this, and it seems like it'd make an awesome song.  Good job!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

4 posted 2001-08-04 03:39 PM


Oh man, I gotta agree with everyone else on this one. It makes a beautiful love song. Thanx for sharing this

Take care,

Trina

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since 2001-08-03
Posts 54

5 posted 2001-08-04 04:49 PM


good job

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