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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10
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Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 12:58 PM


Ten days left
Before those days resume
Old faces to remember
And new ones for my eyes to consume.

Nine days left
Before we start again
New teachers, new classes,
New races to win.

Eight days left
Until we go back
Same old place
New books to pack.

Seven days left
Til summer’s gone
Harder tasks
With the rising of each dawn.

Six days left
Six days to prepare
Waiting for the tests
And see how we’ll fare.

Five days left
Only five more to go
What stories we will tell
What things will show.

Four days left
Less than a week
Will I learn the things this year
That I always seek?

Three days left
Growing closer now
Until the final hour
When they start to show us how.

Two days left
Only two more
Can it be so short a time,
Til I stand before that double-door?

One day left
Dread passing to life
School will come
With or without strife.

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I gotta go back to school in ten more days!  
-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

© Copyright 2001 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2001-07-25 01:05 AM


Aww  I'm sorry!  lol  I liked the poem, though. Reminds me about how happy I should be that I still have another month and a half left of summer...  Anyway, not trying to make you jealous. lol  Enjoy the last days while you can!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Kosetsu
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2 posted 2001-07-25 01:07 AM


...you..have a month and a half left...?   I dun wanna go back yet!! I'll trade ya?

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
3 posted 2001-07-25 01:48 AM


I go back the 13th....UGH! Its going to suck so bad. I have actual classes this year..grrr   I feel your pain. HaHa
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4 posted 2001-07-25 07:51 PM


nice poem...but...your still..lucky..lol..i got "summer school"..:brawling:...im at school everyday!...anyways...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

DarkenedShadow
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Kansas
5 posted 2001-07-25 08:32 PM


Dang I go back to school the 27th of August so I'm all good... sorry to evrybody else, but I guess I feel all your pain. /Nick/
fozzyozzy
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Lessburg Virginia
6 posted 2001-07-25 10:49 PM


Hey some of us are still relaxing i got a summerschool too(kinda its a governor's school).  So i'm in the groove now. Anyway, you're poem brought me down    G
Guess that was the desired effect.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

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7 posted 2001-07-26 02:17 AM


University starts Aug. 29th for me.....I'm cool cuz I got off highschool May 4th...Oh yea!!
Anyhow, great job on this one School boy.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 245
Ilinois
8 posted 2001-07-26 04:58 AM


Classes start Aug 20th for me.  Hehehe lucky me though...second year of college...and I have the greatest schedule...Three days a week!!!  I feel ya though...great description and good luck!
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Jessica
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9 posted 2001-07-26 05:22 AM


Adam - I really like this one. I'm not sure when I have to go back to school, hmm... *runs to go check calender but dosen't have it written down* Oh well, I guess I go back when I go back. =) *hugs&kisses* Love ya!

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-26-2001).]

Punk Angel
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Pennsylvania, US
10 posted 2001-07-26 08:42 AM


nnniiiccee......i dont go back till augest 28th i think, but this year will b harder for me because im going into highschool :P oh well. newayz nice poem, but do u really feel that way bout school??

Punk Angel

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10
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Alabama, USA
11 posted 2001-07-26 10:24 AM


Do I really feel that way? No person in their right mind wants to give up summer to go back through the dredges of school. But it'll be cool to see my friends again.

Only things I'll miss is having the time to work constantly on poems, websites, and the such, as well as getting to know you guys here at PIP better. My schedule's kinda tough this year, especially considering I'll have to have a job to pay for gas and insurance this year.

Heh..plus I'll miss getting to talk to Jessica from 12:00pm to 1:00am near about solid.

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
12 posted 2001-07-27 06:49 AM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......darn schools already started for me.....ugh ugh ugh .......its soooooooooooo boring!!!

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
Smashing Pumkins

Starnite
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since 2001-07-05
Posts 41
Wisconsin
13 posted 2001-07-27 01:01 PM


I fell sorry for you!!!  I don't go back until Aug. 30th.  But that was a good post.

**Sarah

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14 posted 2001-07-27 01:16 PM


OOO, that kinda stinks..
i go back september 4th!!
haha

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."



chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15
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Canada
15 posted 2001-07-27 01:48 PM


Cute poem, although I'd have to say it brings back memories of school and 6am mornings...*shudder* I'm not a morning person.
I have orientation Sept.4...which is pointless because that's when we get our lockers and stuff...
I GO BACK SEPT.5!! HAAAAAH! I win.  

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Ina
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Quebec, Canada
16 posted 2001-07-27 02:08 PM


geez it sounded like a countdown to doomsday. But nonetheless I liked the poem. Keep writing.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Fading Away
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17 posted 2001-08-01 01:25 PM


This was really cute Adam!  Me?  I have to go back September 4th.. he he he.. Anyways, nicely done.  I really enjoyed this read.  And there's always next summer  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Low Man's Lyric
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since 2001-04-03
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In a dream
18 posted 2001-08-01 03:07 PM


Ha ha I enjoyed this. Ten more days? I go back sometime in September.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

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