Teen Poetry #5 |
You Loved Me Anyway |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Howdy! It's been a bit since I've posted anything here. Actually, it's been a whle since I've even written anything. Darned writers block... Oh well, I think I'm near the end of it now, I think this is decent. I'm leaving on Thursday for 9 days, so I won't be here for a while. I'm going to Oregon, camping on the coast. I'll make sure to bring my notebook so I can write there. See you all when I get back! Here's the song, I had my friend Emily on my mind when I wrote it. So I suppose it's about her. lol I just wrote it, so it's not the greatest yet. It needs some work, so if you think there's something I should work on, let me know. Let me know what you think! YOU LOVED ME ANYWAY We met when I was just One or two days old We had no idea What our lives would unfold We spent a lot of time together In our younger days As time passed by We crept our separate ways Chorus: But during all this time You've been here for me You didn't care what I did Or where I would be You loved me anyway There was a time That we slowly drifted away Now those days passed And close beside you I will stay Chorus We never had love That was more than just friends We're there for eachother And I hope that never ends Chorus Yeah, you loved me anyway And I have loved you too - Cody - |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I was wonderin where you were...Have fun in Oregon! Anyway... I liked this alot. It was sweet. Sound like a country song- am I right? |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
You are very right. lol Emily is one of my best friends, and the lead singer of our "band". - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Okay. I take it back. Writer's block is still very much there. lol My life is just too darn boring right now, I have like no inspiration, and the only way I can write is if it comes from the heart. - Cody - |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I really liked this, and I know all about writers block. Hope you have fun in Oregon and come back with some cool new pieces. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
very nice and very sweet. I wish i could hear the music that you've put to it. I really liked it anyway though, thanks for sharing |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Cody, this is awesome. You never cease to amaze me! Great job! Doesn't writers block suck? Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I would actualy like ti hear this in song I bet it would rule, wait I know it would rule. Always the great one aren't ya... later. /Nick/ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one! Well done! Oh and have fun in Oregon. God knows that's an awesome place to be lol I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
i like this a lot, it shows progression... VERY NICE ALLIE |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Yes i enjoyed this song.. I really liked some of your ideas u put into it.. Great job and have fun camping, dont get eaten by anything!! ~Jeff~ |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Beautiful read. Are you going to make this into a song, or is it already one, or is it...? I think I'm missing something here... (Yeah, your mind) Uhm... Well, if it isn't a song, it would work really well as one. It flows just like one. Until next time, Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Yeah, I took this to be a song... Very nicely done, Cody! Good to see you back... and hate to see you leave again so quickly, but have an awesome time in Oregon! Nice work on this poem/song. I enjoyed it! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice to see a song from you...enjoyed the read...you written it VERY nicely. "if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry- |
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