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CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 12:43 PM


Howdy!  It's been a bit since I've posted anything here.  Actually, it's been a whle since I've even written anything.  Darned writers block...  Oh well, I think I'm near the end of it now, I think this is decent.  I'm leaving on Thursday for 9 days, so I won't be here for a while.  I'm going to Oregon, camping on the coast. I'll make sure to bring my notebook so I can write there.  See you all when I get back! Here's the song, I had my friend Emily on my mind when I wrote it.  So I suppose it's about her.  lol  I just wrote it, so it's not the greatest yet.  It needs some work, so if you think there's something I should work on, let me know.     Let me know what you think!


YOU LOVED ME ANYWAY

We met when I was just
One or two days old
We had no idea
What our lives would unfold

We spent a lot of time together
In our younger days
As time passed by
We crept our separate ways

Chorus:
But during all this time
You've been here for me
You didn't care what I did
Or where I would be
You loved me anyway

There was a time
That we slowly drifted away
Now those days passed
And close beside you I will stay

Chorus

We never had love
That was more than just friends
We're there for eachother
And I hope that never ends

Chorus

Yeah, you loved me anyway
And I have loved you too

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

© Copyright 2001 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
Spice
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since 2001-04-13
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Resting in my cardboard box.
1 posted 2001-07-25 01:51 AM


I was wonderin where you were...Have fun in Oregon!
Anyway...
I liked this alot. It was sweet.
Sound like a country song- am I right?

CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA
2 posted 2001-07-25 02:03 AM


You are very right.  lol  Emily is one of my best friends, and the lead singer of our "band".

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA
3 posted 2001-07-25 02:16 AM


Okay.  I take it back.  Writer's block is still very much there.  lol  My life is just too darn boring right now, I have like no inspiration, and the only way I can write is if it comes from the heart.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2001-07-25 10:52 AM


I really liked this, and I know all about writers block.  Hope you have fun in Oregon and come back with some cool new pieces.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

mistic
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since 2001-05-06
Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.
5 posted 2001-07-25 01:18 PM


very nice and very sweet. I wish i could hear the music that you've put to it. I really liked it anyway though, thanks for sharing  
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6 posted 2001-07-25 02:02 PM


Cody, this is awesome.  You never cease to amaze me! Great job!
Doesn't writers block suck?

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
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Kansas
7 posted 2001-07-25 04:25 PM


I would actualy like ti hear this in song I bet it would rule, wait I know it would rule. Always the great one aren't ya... later. /Nick/
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8 posted 2001-07-26 02:37 AM


I liked this one! Well done!
Oh and have fun in Oregon. God knows that's an awesome place to be   lol

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
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9 posted 2001-07-26 09:06 AM


i like this a lot, it shows progression...
VERY NICE

ALLIE

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10 posted 2001-07-26 01:47 PM


Yes i enjoyed this song..
I really liked some of your ideas u put into it..
Great job and have fun camping, dont get eaten by anything!!

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."



chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15
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Canada
11 posted 2001-07-26 03:05 PM


Beautiful read.   Are you going to make this into a song, or is it already one, or is it...? I think I'm missing something here... (Yeah, your mind)
Uhm...
Well, if it isn't a song, it would work really well as one. It flows just like one.

Until next time,
Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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12 posted 2001-07-31 12:11 PM


Yeah, I took this to be a song... Very nicely done, Cody!  Good to see you back... and hate to see you leave again so quickly, but have an awesome time in Oregon!   Nice work on this poem/song.  I enjoyed it!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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13 posted 2001-08-01 03:11 AM


nice to see a song from you...enjoyed the read...you written it VERY nicely.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

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