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Words_of_Glitter
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since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2001-07-19 12:19 PM

Ohmygod, stop making me laugh
Tears are starting to form in the corner of my eyes
And for someone that makes me so happy,
The last thing I want to do is cry
I never knew you were so funny
That is what makes me like you so much
Makes me want to talk to you for hours
Makes me want for our bodies to touch
This undeniable yearning to have you
Is about to drive me insane
Don't you want to be with me too?
I thought you were done with playing games?
I know you like because you tell me
But I wish you'd show me somehow
You said you wanted to wait awhile,
But there's no better time than now
You also said you liked hanging out with your friends
And doing whatever you choose
But I am not that type of girl
With me, there's no freedom to lose
And I guarantee that you'd have as much fun, if not More, hanging out with me instead of the guys
And I'll always be honest with you
You can count on me to not tell you any lies
You know how good we'd be together?
I'm not saying that it has to last forever,
But at least you'll know that you made me smile
If only for a little while

*To Brian*

"Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now."

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-07-19 12:52 PM

But at least you'll know that you made me smile
If only for a little while

this is soo cute!!!..nice read

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-19 02:02 AM

i REALLy liked this...you written this VERY nicely...it was a great triubute...hope you gave it to him...bye Sarah

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).]

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-07-19 02:36 AM

I really liked this one. Great tibute... I don't know what it is, but I did really enjoy this one. Keep writing.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-19 04:17 AM

I really felt the ending rocked. Completely and simply rocked. Awesome job on this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2001-07-19 09:48 AM

that was a sweet poem. I hope he got the chance to read it. Nice job.

-JR

Hill's_Chatabox
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

6 posted 2001-07-19 12:46 PM

aaaahhhh, that was so cute!!!, I knew it was about brian as soon as I read the title. It was a good poem. I liked it alot, I think you have just found your new inspiration to your poems. (brian)and not steve. I am sooo happy for you. I liked the poem a-lot. girl you make me smile, you make me cry, and yet I would do it all over again.

love ya girl
~Hill~
~Best Friends Forever~

Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!!

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it, Beacuse I might do so

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

7 posted 2001-07-19 02:13 PM

I was thinking like the smurfs, and that scene.....reminds of something i cant say here...or ill get in trouble.
but anyways this was an amzing poem.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-19 09:39 PM

I liked this a whole lot. I related to the content... I liked the lines: "And for someone that makes me so happy/The last thing I want to do is cry" I liked this a lot, Sarah. nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

9 posted 2001-07-19 10:14 PM

"You said you wanted to wait awhile,
But there's no better time than now"
So true. HaHA- I liked those lines- and the last lines rocked as well.
Nice read, Sarah.

Hill's_Chatabox
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

10 posted 2001-07-20 11:11 AM

Hey Girl!!!! just wanted to let ya know that I read the poem again,you crack me up!!! I love ya girl. and not to mention the poem
~Hill~

happiness ia a journey,not a destinaton,
so,love like you've never been hurt, dance like no one's watching,work like you don't need the money.

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