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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
yea yea not my best yada yada, but there it is staring out the window but not looking at whats there im seeing my reflection shrouded by the dark, empty room reflecting on who it is I am rejecting everything that is a part of me tearing myself to pieces analyzing bit by bit as I go embracing myself for who I am realizing that this is what makes me, Me glimpsing the truth of what I am all as i stare out this window at the absolute nothing that I see which is only me “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hit me home...very true Tiff  ...that we find oursleves in nothing...as i have written about this...great job!im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I really liked this Tiff. Wonderful write. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
It's great I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwww this was really sad. The ending is when you finally notice exactly what yer talking about. Kind of a surprise, if you ask me. I really liked this one Tiff.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
Nice, I liked it... Dont critize yourself, for a have heard that each one of us is different, and that is what makes each one of us special. and this writing is very special. Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
i liked this one... Keep writing |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wow, this is a good one Tiff. I just believe that you can add more to it to make it great. *applauds* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great. sad but very good. I agree with Acire, perhaps a little more to it. Regina |
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