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pure_innocence
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

0 posted 2001-07-15 08:08 PM

This is my first stab at writing a song so please, bear with me

. For those of you having seen Mary Poppins, read it with the tune "Chim Chim Cherree"

Dream dream little dreamer, drift far into sleep,
Wake not to nightmares, or the horrors they keep,
Float far away onto heavens ground,
Be lost among angels, where you need not be found,
Fly through the clouds, sail cross the sun,
Swim in the moonlight, be sure you’ve had fun,

Dream dream little dreamer, drift far into sleep,
Wake not to nightmares, or the horrors they keep
Slide down a rainbow, dance in the rain,
Sing with the wind, skip down the lane,
Swing by the stars, race comets and win
And when you have finished, start over again,

Dream dream little dreamer drift far into sleep,
Wake not to nightmares, nor horrors they keep,
Sleep on my sweet dreamer, wake unto the dawn,
Rise with the sun, trust that your troubles are gone,
Go now young dreamer, and greet bright the day,
Return in the night, there sweet dreamer we’ll play,

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-07-15 08:15 PM

I love the movie! and your write to the song was very good! i found myself singing along in my head

LOL great job

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-07-15 08:25 PM

I thought you wrote that very well. I was singing out loud to this, and yourwords fit right with the song. Good Job!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-16 12:25 PM

beautiful imagery...you written this one well...loved read, Jamie

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-16 04:48 PM

You write with absolutely excellent images... they really put abeautiful picture in my head. Very impressive. As for this being your first song, I think it was well written. Nicely done.. I couldn't put a tune to it, but do you have it on midi or MP3? Nice work, I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-16 07:51 PM

Wow!

Yet again- I'm incredibly impressed. I love this. I was picturing a mother whisper this over her child while he slept....So sweet.

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

6 posted 2001-07-16 08:05 PM

I'm touched that you guys thought so well of this!!!! I was almost sure I'd get no replies!!! Thank you for proving me wrong!!!! I really don't like the song Chim CHim Cherree but I found that the tune always stuck in my head, so I created words I did like. Thanks again for the encouragement and support, it means the world to me!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-17 08:42 PM

Wow I really liked this one! You are such a talented writer! I am very impressed with your work and hope to see much more of it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-08-16 03:29 AM

pure_innocence -
   This is beautiful!
   Mary Poppins is one of my all-time favorites,
   so I know the song well.
   The words you've written for it are lovely.
   Wonderfully done!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

9 posted 2001-08-16 07:27 PM

wow! yeah i really liked this one too!

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

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