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Goodbye to a friend
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Goodbye to a friend |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
This is about a boy in my youth group that commited suicide. I didn't really know him, but I thought I'd make a tribute to him. So here it is. Goodbye to a friend in memory of Jesse you took your life in whats seems like just the other day yeah you were quiet, you never did have much to say but everyone thought you were you were ok, everything was fine you looked great, but you weren't, but there wasn't any sign sure, you were different, but it didn't really bother us much some were scared of you, afriad to look or touch but we knew the real you, that seemed to be a nice guy ok, sometimes you were distant, sometimes shy but i guess nobody knew how you really felt inside i suppose no one tried, maybe thats why you shot yourself and died *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
ive never really known anyone that commited suicide..but theres been many people i knew killed in car accidents. i was only really close to one of them.. Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was a nice tribute Angel Bee May his soul rest in peace hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful and sad...great job on writing this tribute. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
that is a nice thoughtful tribute "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
A great tribute! Nice read. I'm sorry about your friend.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
VERY sad here. I know you didn't know him, but it's just always so sad when somebody results to such actions to improve their internal being....well not improve, but just plain end it. My prayers go out to Jesse's family.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
suicide can be so painful to hear of, especially when its someone you knew. It's always hard to look back and think if only. Perhaps as well as praying for Jesse's family, we can pray for you and your youth group. ALLIE |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Good tribute, hope everything gets better for you..smile ~Jeff~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Beautiful tribute, sad really, I can't imagine how this person must have felt to believe that the only way out it by killing himself. Good luck. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so sad. BUt a beautiful tribute. Your friend is somewhere better... just keep that in mind. I'm sorry you had to deal with this. It still effects you even if you werent close... Nicely done. I really enjoyed this. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
very nice tribute...people can be so unsuspecting sometimes. Its a shame that this happened. Good poem |
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