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Hallucination
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0 posted 2001-07-11 05:27 PM


I’ve lost a lot of things in my life,
But never anything this precious.
And what am I left with, “memories”!!
What did I do to deserve this?

I can’t remember a single thing I did so wrong!
It just started out of no where.
From now on the road just keeps getting lon-ger.

I’m lost can’t find my way.
It’s getting harder to move, on
Can’t figure out what to say.
I can’t believe everything’s, gone
I’m lost can’t find my way.

Pictures, photos, is all I’ve got left,
Can’t stop crying in my dreams.
Though it’s a dream the tears, “are real”
Their much more real they seem.

The sunrise will not be the same no more!
Everything around as chanced.
A flower will not be the same as be-fore.

I’m lost can’t find my way.
It’s getting harder to move, on
Can’t figure out what to say.
I can’t believe that their all, gone
I’m lost can’t find my way.

So what do I do,
Can’t figure out what’s true
Where do I go,
So lost I don’t know
So what do I do,
Can’t figure out what’s true
Where do I go,
So lost I don’t know

I’m lost can’t find my way.
It’s getting harder to move, on
Can’t figure out what to say.
I can’t believe that their all, gone
I’m lost can’t find my way.


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1 posted 2001-07-11 06:44 PM


Nicely done here Hallu........I enjoyed yet another song of yours.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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2 posted 2001-07-12 02:25 AM


enjoyed the the song ...quite filled with emotions...great job.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-07-15 10:12 PM


Only 2 replies??  Wow!  I can't believe that.  This is a very well written piece.  I enjoyed this quite a bit!  Nicely done, I look forward to seeing more  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Spice
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4 posted 2001-07-16 06:48 PM


Wonderful song, Hallucination.
I liked it.  

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