Calling All Teens To Open #19

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-02-20 12:02 PM

Calling All Teens To Open #19
~*Marge Tindal*~

I writ a little birth-of-day poem
for your Teen Moderator
I'm hoping you'll stop by
and congratulate her~

Mz Vicky will be elated
to see your sweet replies
So hurry up and get there
for her Birthday SURPRISE~

Here is the link
where you can leave your rhyme
It's up in Open #19
Hope you get there in time~

/pip/Forum58/HTML/000501.html

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2002-02-20 11:41 PM

C'mon everybody, let's wish her a happy birthday

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-02-21 12:04 PM

Thanks Dopey ... she's worth it~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-02-21 12:37 PM

Happy Birthday Marge!

Lol, now for the critique...

This poem is good! I like it, the rhyming scheme helps me to understand it! Lol, I'll be sure to check out Open Poetry #19 someday! Maybe even post it!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-21 02:23 PM

WOW...running there now!!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2002-02-21 08:40 PM

bump

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2002-02-22 09:09 AM

LOL..silly alex...its VICKYS birthday!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY VICKY!!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-02-22 11:24 AM

Thanks so much!
I appreciate every one of you!

Cherish...thanks for setting him straight.LOL

Marge...thanks, again, my friend...you're the best.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2002-02-22 08:46 PM

bump

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2002-02-23 10:18 PM

i'm coming i'm coming...

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