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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-12-16 11:50 AM


I knew the pain was bound to return,
'cuz what you said left such a burn.
It seems, all these problems we can't face,
you walked away, left me in this place.
You didn't come back and hold me tight,
you didn't come back and say its alright.
It seems you've made your descision,
though I don't know the reason.
You left me here to fall apart,
how do I mend my broken heart?
What could I say,
to someone who's already walked away?
i know its kinda short but i was just letting my fingers flow and this was the outcome, so tell me what u think.....

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-20 11:16 AM


Your feelings are right out in the open in here. Hope things work out for you.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2001-12-21 06:21 AM


Lots of emotion in this poem Spinegrinder, I hope things get better for you

"No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe"

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