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Elvenblood
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0 posted 2001-12-14 08:28 PM


My eyes are drawn
From color to gray
Words fade long
As they trees sway

The needles sway aside
Lolling to and fro
They pitch: the tree denied
Fall to the ground below

Rain starts to freeze
Then turn to sleet
Sigh away the breeze
True love we meet

In an ice palace
Our cabin in the pine
Our love over zealous
Hold your heart to mine


     Think what you will of this, I love it

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

© Copyright 2001 Bryan W. Holmes - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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1 posted 2001-12-15 01:15 AM


This is a cool poem. Very interesting
Jon

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2 posted 2001-12-15 02:10 AM


I like this  
Moonlight Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-15 06:57 PM


I like the images, nice poem.

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4 posted 2001-12-15 07:02 PM


SUH-WEET

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