from this rage, i will be free

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Teen Poetry #5

from this rage, i will be free

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-12-10 08:23 PM

So much rage
deep inside.
Its finally flowing,
go run and hide.
'Cuz if it catches you,
there will be nothing left.
It'll steal away your soul,
just like grand-theft.
I've finally released it,
it's coming to get you.
It's such a intoxication,
like a perfect homemade brew.
It dulls your senses,
and drives you insane.
And all these feelings i've felt for you,
were all felt in VAIN!!!
How dare you do this to me!
I never thought I deserved this.
I do believe, your ignorance,
nobody will miss.
I'm quivering with hatred,
for all the stuff you've done to me.
After this is over,
from your torture then,
then my friend,
then I WILL BE FREE!

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

sweetlilangel
Junior Member

since 2001-12-05

Posts 26

1 posted 2001-12-11 06:39 AM

Hey hun this is really good! I think i know who it's about but i'm not a 100% sure. Just remember i will always love you no madder what he says!!~Cassi

Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-11 09:42 AM

the emotions you pour into this come screaming out.....wow! I really hope you give this to the intended

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-12-11 09:50 AM

I hope that the anger is released and something fruitful comes out...

anger is vanity in itself...

a nice write, this one...

thanks for sharing...

regards,
sudhir

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-12-11 09:55 AM

Now this is a piece that stands up and demands attention. The hostility in this is so amazing. Poetry like this is awesome for the simple fact it's raw emotion talking, not the mind.

You've done a good job with this. Be proud.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-12-11 01:57 PM

You really put a lotta emotions into this one...i enjoyed it..nicely done

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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