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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
There's a place I go to hide away where i can sit . This is the only place where i am safe from people and there [edit]. Safe from life and the problems in it. Someday i'll tell you my place to hide. Maybe someday after i die. But what if that's today???????........... [This message has been edited by acire (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
hey gurl! this wuz good, but not ur best i must admit. but keep em comin!  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Don't hide from the problems, because the solution might just walk right by and you won't see it! I like the questioning in it, though I thought the last line sort of threw it off, more so the structure than the meaning. Anywho, keep writing! Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Strong. I felt like this once too. Hiding doesn't do anything, ok? You're better to come out with a huge bat and take everything apart so to speak. Keep strong and if you need to talk, shadowchaser46@hotmail.com.  BTW, you might want to fix the profanities because they'll have to go. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey girl, be strong stop hiding an dshow everyone who you truly are hope things get better for you thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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