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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26
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0 posted 2001-11-25 08:03 PM


I need a band-aid.
A giant one.
So I can fix my life.
And maybe,
The scar wont be too bad.
Or maybe,
It will just end, like my life.
And never
Have a chance to get to
Point that
Everyone calls "better."
Oh, lord!
Please let it heal!

This refelcts on my "issues" that I'm having right now.

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-25 09:56 PM


One day you will look back on these "issues" and see that it wasnt as bad as it seemed!
Keep your head up.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
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2 posted 2001-11-26 01:27 AM


Life never seems like it will get better and it's hard dealing with the issues you face.But I hope someday for you things will get better and you will be able to heal because I know what it feels like to hurt everyday and I would never want anyone to feel that way.But I loved this poem keep up the awsome work.
  LAuren

DawnG
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3 posted 2001-11-26 12:50 PM


Zukene Chic,

I've been where you are before, and life can get better. I hope things get better for you soon.

                                   Dawn

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4 posted 2001-12-21 04:58 PM


Praying to Him is a right way to go to
Let's just not hope that things end
Life is so beautiful is you only know where to look
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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