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Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-11-27 11:35 PM

nothing great....i had to push for it...

It's not honesty anymore
just fun, just weird
why do humans bother?
there really isn't that much
to fight for
to many dreams now
to many ideals now
a bunch of bull
do your cry like me?
or r u unhuman?
We don't matter much to each other
its probaly our boredom
i'm not quiet sure
are you?
a bunch of garbage to be dumped
on the nearest kind soul
how can we really believe in love anymore
its hard isn't
with both our blood spilt on the ground
both are bodies destroyed
its just a bunch of crap
all these ideals we have
i think i just re-realized that
wow
no wonder...i felt weird with the
rays of happiness
we are all to complex
there are the simple few
but nothing new
do u you really care about what i'm writing
no
there is nothing to it
i dont really care
doesnt bother
what doesnt is the un-human types
who roam around saying the honest
truth
you want to hate it
but they are completely right
they know they are too
which makes it all the worse.

Regina L.

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2001-11-27 11:59 PM

well i guess no one else cares but i do. and i feel the same way as you. you should email me some time i think we would get along. i am the "Midnight Falcon"

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-11-28 01:30 PM

very thought provoking piece, you put a lot into this. i could relate to a lot of the things you were saying in this.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Yoda
Junior Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 19

3 posted 2001-11-28 05:19 PM

Hmm... just went with the flow of emotion and thought, right? Yeah, I do that a lot. Just a massive flood. Sometimes it's more honest that way. Although, you don't seem to care for that too much. I liked the energy in this. I could really feel you as I read it. Thanks for sharing.

You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-11-28 05:32 PM

True. A good poem here Regina, keep your head up.

White.

-C.M.

"I feel the sting of an insignificant wasp, and yet, I fear that I am alergic"

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-11-30 12:38 PM

PHWOOOAR!....loving this piece regi...power packed and through provoking. enjoyed the stellar piece loads

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-11-30 04:46 PM

*raises hand*  I care about this poem!

I think this is such a powerful piece.  Extremely thought-provoking.  I thought you did very well on getting your feelings out there.  We are all so complex... strange to think about, though, huh?

Very nice work, as always, Regi!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

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since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-12-04 10:12 AM

INA --- let's talk and I'll tell you what I feel about the poem

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-12-05 02:16 PM

indeed, thought provoking...i found it a hard hitting poem for the subject written...great piece...i enjoyed it fully, Ina.

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keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-12-06 03:30 PM

Very nice poem. A hard truth to swallow, that's for sure. Not my fav. but I haven't read anything from you that I don't like. See ya.
Jon

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"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

10 posted 2001-12-07 11:42 AM

Ahhh I have missed your poetry dearly!
Roar emotion is what it's all about.
You do it well every time.
Thanks for sharing this.
Thorougly enjoyed it.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.

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