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Until I Die |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Hey. This i one that I thought of while walking home from school today and wrote down just a few minutes ago. It is raining today and rain always reminds me of tears and crying, yet I LOVE rain... Anywho. This one is a different kinda poem for me... But I kinda like it. lol Anyway, if you could let me know what you think of it, I'd appreciate it.  UNTIL I DIE Deep down Inside of me I constantly Cry... Every time That I cry Part of me Dies... The tears that hurt The most Are the ones that kill From the inside out They burn and they burn Down inside Burn at my heart, At my mind Like fire Love My one escape And my heart's one Desire But it burns And I cry Then I cry some more ...Until I die - Cody - |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I love it..from a "girls" point of view. I just started writing poetry..What do you think of when you write poems? I have to think of my b/f Jeffy. Read my two poems that I wrote..I just joined the other day..Keep up the good work. "Water Over Matter" |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
Good job! I like the way it reads. Keep up the good work  |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Hey sweetie i know i havnt been reading your work lately but i have been slacking im sorry .. but i can honestly say i loved this poem~!!!!!! i really did keep it up sweetie~!  *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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