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fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-11-04 01:28 AM

Drizzling and the Stars

The first
    is a surprise so gentle and cold
    but it's the realization
          of what's there
After the first
    it all comes a rush of emotion
    it kills my legs
    it brings me down
    so there is only up
And so it is that sky remains
    with its caterpillar pictures
    with the wink of existence so close
    with the invitation of eternity
I want to share this with you
  more than anything in this world
                            (I want to fulfill this
dream)
This the only epistle of love
    I will not write of heartbreak
    nor the happy flower smelling kisses of tomorrow's love sick child. Now what would you share?

Now the falling last
    the catering drizzle
    delivers me even farther you know your soul is
There
    and, like that first drop
    you'll taste it till the next...
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I'm back! *crickets* oh well, anyway i gots my new computer so i'll be posting some more hopefully, but i'm doing the theatre stuff at my school so I'm low on time and stuff. oh well enjoy it if you can.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-11-04 10:27 AM

"This the only epistle of love
I will not write of heartbreak
nor the happy flower smelling kisses of tomorrow's love sick child. Now what would you share?"

WOW!
That part just does it for me. This poem was great!, That part just leaves me breathless.
Great, great poem, keep sharing.

Five Stars
* * * * *
-C.M.

Skyfire