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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-11-01 10:13 AM

Reliving the memory,
Each and every day.
Cant get the pain to subside,
The ache wont go away.
Nervousness engulfs me,
Can never move on to tomorrow,
Always stuck in yesterday,
Its heart ache and its sorrow.

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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Fl

1 posted 2001-11-01 02:14 PM

I relate to this very much.
Great job on it.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2001-11-01 02:56 PM

Very good write. Short, but directly to the point. You lay your feelings out, but keep it brief.

Good luck Shugarhi...

Sincerely,
Titus

PS: This line tripped me up:

Can never move on to tomorrow

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

"With his ONE EYE!!!"
The Green guy... with his ONE EYE! Ha!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-11-02 01:02 AM

I don't know about this one... it's different... cool... awesome... I think I like it!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-02 10:06 AM

Well i hope you do like it sky!!!

Thanks for the replies guys

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-11-02 01:08 PM

Yes, I know all this too well. I think you did good on expressing this, and plus it was short! I love the short ones hehe.
Hope to see more shugar.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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