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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-10-30 05:43 PM



Drugs By James Johnson

NO I am not on drugs
and no I do not eat bugs
not in a train or on a plane
cause if I was I'd be insane

NO no I do not could not do drugs
I like wigs when they look like rugs
it's only cause I eat lots of cheese
that I am found to be without fleas

I know you think I'm a crazy loon
and maybe I look like a balloon
but it's ok ok with me
cause I will always be drug free

look look what is that
it's big pink and fat
it looks like a pink elephant to me
but I know for fact this couldn't be

NO no no drugs for me I am clean
if you call me names I'll even say your mean
straight edge and an edge that's straight
no drugs for me cause death isn't my fate

SO like I said before I could not would not with a goat
I could not would not with a goat
I do not like drugs spam you are
I do not like drugs by and far
a play on Dr. SUesse's cool little rhyme
is my words of craziness such a crime

NO no I will not eat the drugs you see
cause it's only cheese I want for me
nothing better than a lump of limberger
on top of my phatty mac hamburger.

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

© Copyright 2001 the_rescue - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-30 10:43 PM


ooh, i like i like.

i'm anti-drug, which is a far cry from what i used to be.

one bad trip can really wake you up.

your rhyming pattern is a little off though.  you might want to play with it.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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2 posted 2001-10-31 12:21 PM


LOL!!

CHEESE?!? Anyway, nice play on "Green Eggs and Ham"! I'm not into drugs, just the natural highs that I get from life!

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~Love me because I am Rhonda

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3 posted 2001-10-31 10:09 AM


GREEN EGGS AND HAM!!! YAY!!! I LOVED THIS!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 2001-11-02 02:58 AM


Ha! You sounded high! LoL. I'm anti-drugs as well... this one was humorous.  

Sincerely,
Titus

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

"With his ONE EYE!!!"
The Green guy... with his ONE EYE! Ha!

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5 posted 2001-11-02 01:05 PM


I thought this was a serious fun poem. Very serious topic, but written in a fun way. Dr. Suess would be proud.
Well done!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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