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Zukene_Chic
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0 posted 2001-10-28 05:11 PM


Here I am
Another year later
Haloweens coming
And I have no plans
No friend who can buy "stuff"
Is having a party
Too old to trick or treat
As much as I hate to...
Lets go pumpkin smashing

This is a sign that I have NO life.

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1 posted 2001-10-28 05:16 PM


i like this one.  it reminded me of my grade nine, ten and eleven halloweens.  man i sound like a dork.  grade nine my friends ditched me, grade ten i was moving that day because we had posession of the house november first and grade eleven i was on the outs with my friends so i just handed out candy.

it sucks, so just go to the store, get lots of candy and scary movies and enjoy yourself without them!!  relax and treat yourself.  heh.

back on topic, i LOVED this piece.  i have no clue why, it's just very appealing.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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2 posted 2001-10-28 06:10 PM


Interesting poem keep up the great work!
  Lauren

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3 posted 2001-10-29 10:16 AM


U have no life huh??   Im sorry to hear that...I hate the feeling that i feel to old to go trick or treating..i'd give anything to be 10 again on wednesday just so i can dress up and go and wont feel foolish...dont go pumpkin smashing though...grrrr i hate it when people do that it makes me so mad!!!

I liked the piece...it reminded me a lot of how i feel right now looking on to halloween

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 2001-10-29 11:58 PM


Growing up sucks, hey? I totally hear you! Long live trick-or-treating!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

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