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Zengo
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0 posted 2001-10-25 02:46 AM


She was all he ever needed,
He lived his life on her every word,
Love, care, affection, infatuation,
He'd lay down this life,
For his cause,
For his princess,
Yet he didn't match the vision,
Her vision of happiness,
Nothing could stop the blissful delight,
Nothing but himself for he wasn't perfect,
For her image of the unblemished,
A soul so flawless it was a mirage,
In it's own right,
A conception so unthinkable,
A dream so fulfilling,
It halted the fantasy of perfect love.....

© Copyright 2001 Nicholas Wright - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-25 04:33 AM


Beautiful!!

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-10-25 10:13 AM


This was such an amazing poem!!! absolutely wonderful ::Applauds::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-10-25 09:11 PM


Wow. I am just about speechless! Good job!

It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh?

Knight of Secrecy
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4 posted 2001-10-25 09:20 PM


Great poem!

-C.M.

Zengo
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5 posted 2001-10-26 09:04 PM


Thanks all...

Nick

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