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K. Rebel
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0 posted 2001-10-23 10:31 PM


I am the poet
I am charity,
I am life
And I am sincerity.

I am the moment
I am the lightness,
I am the event
And I am goodness.

I am the charisma
I am the sun,
I am the light
And I am your smile.

I am the man
I am darkness,
I am loss
And I am bad.

I am the writer
I am the poet,
I am the chaos
But I am the truth


© Copyright 2001 Danny Brown - All Rights Reserved
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2001-10-23 10:49 PM


.....true!


         

"......",said the wise mute.

Zukene_Chic
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Cali
2 posted 2001-10-23 11:27 PM


This is so true, and so well spoken. *huggles* Wonderful read.
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3 posted 2001-10-23 11:33 PM


Well done on this one!

It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh?

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-10-24 07:57 AM


Very True!!!! Very true....

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Knight of Secrecy
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5 posted 2001-10-24 10:08 AM


True, nice, dark

keep it up
-C.M.

rolly_polly
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6 posted 2001-10-25 04:56 PM


Great job Mr.Rebel!Keep it up boy!

~parallel universe~

Missthang
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7 posted 2001-10-25 07:26 PM


true, true, true.....writing brings out the absolute truth.

-ab

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8 posted 2001-10-31 01:07 PM


Well done here. A lot of deep thoughts within the whole piece. No matter what you say you are, you're always going to be you, which in itself is truth. well expressed.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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