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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
I have lost all of my reason, strange words come from my mouth, during this wild season, where I have foun myself in a bout. Here along this crazy night, life is nothing but a disturbing thing, look up, look down, I see no light. But I here the words of death calling. I see nothing but the black color. I have gone far, far away, to seem to see I have another, another little game I cannot play. I have died still with life, only to notice I am but a small device. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A great post from Daniel "Danny" Brown keep up the good work -CM. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"I have lost all of my reason, strange words come from my mouth," wow, such dark poetry danny! i hope youre feeling ok buddy  i thought that this was a very good first post from you- makes me look forward to any more that you may have  ..oh and:  Welcome Danny! im sure youre going to have a blast here matey- enjoy reading, replying, posting and growing within these walls.. ....oh and if yer ready to lose your sanity click onto the teen chat part of pip....Ready?  see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
aawww, c'mon, Cherish, don't scare the poor kid... Honestly, it's a little... *odd* in teen chat, but it's fun anyway. I think I'm going to really like your writing, so don't quit posting! Welcome!!!  If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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dastard Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 55in tearing silence |
Okay, there have been those shiny "Wellcome" threads before and I'm sure there are still some to come, but not from me... I'm sorry, but this isn't MY thing... Anyways, really great poem, very dark, but that's nothing bad, is it? Cherish is right... Teen Chat is the place to be, but you only may enter at your own risk, although a disclaimer is still to come  Have fun around here, see you "Only two things are infinite; the universe and humans' stupidity, but I'm not sure yet about the universe." ~Albert Einstein |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
powerfull words! this poem is so "dark", good but dark. we all feel this way at times so you are not alone. just know there is a light at the end of every tunnel. great first post! i look forward to reading more of yours :-) |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
Hey Danny! I really enjoyed this, yes very dark but very honest and i love that. I hope you keep posting here, we sure will enjoy yer presence Anyway take care and hang in there buddy!   ~parallel universe~ |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
this sounds oddly like a Matchbox 20/creed redo, but then again, that's just me What is it you have to answer? But to answer you have to ask? And to ask you have to speak? And to speak you have to know, The answer. [This message has been edited by hoppy (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WeLcOmE 2 PaSsIoNs!!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome hun I enjoyed this piece a lot...what a way to enter here at passions!! whoa! Its nice to have you with us and i hope you enjoy it here as much as the rest of us do! I cant wait to read more from you so PLEASE keep posting!!! Welcome again!  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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