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Ender
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0 posted 2001-10-19 01:16 AM


Your face so innocent
Your lips so elegant
And I ask myself
Am I in a dream?

You have changed my life
Told me things I have never been told
Loved me in ways I still can’t explain
You have opened my eyes to the world
I look forward to every time we are together
I cherish every moment we speak
And treasure the words of love you say

Before I met you
I had low self-esteem
And hope
Now, that’s all changed
My self esteem is high
And hope is not needed
Because I have found what I was looking for

You and I are so much alike
Could it be?
Just a dream?
Pinch me
Wake me up
All I can say is
I hope it isn’t a dream
Because I am in love
With the most beautiful girl in the world.

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

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1 posted 2001-10-19 07:24 AM


Isn't love the most beautiful feeling in the world!

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:26 AM


Awww yay!!! Your in love hehehe thats one of the best feelings if not the #1 best feeling in the entire world  <3333333333333333 ahh...love   Congrats, im very happy for you! Are you considering giving this to her? I hope so, i think she'd love to read it  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-10-19 09:44 AM


C'est l'amour. (or something like that.. hehehe)

You write about love beautifully and very honestly. You recognize all the things it has given you... congradulations.  

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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4 posted 2001-10-20 05:46 AM


Good for you.  
Nice piece. You've come across well and I hope you're happy for a long time.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interupted.

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