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Missthang
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0 posted 2001-10-18 10:19 PM


I have so many shoes
I don't know what to do

Some are red, some are blue
Some are old, some are new

Some are big, some are small
I have some that make me tall

Some are dressy, some are not
Some have purple polka dots

Running shoes with bright green laces
Helping me to win those races

My shoes make sounds when I hop
I even have some that go flip flop

I still don't know what to do
But I could never have too many shoes

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1 posted 2001-10-18 11:24 PM


you really hit a nerve here.

i LOVE shoes and socks.

i hate feet, so you have to make them look good.  i never own less than nine pairs of shoes at one time.

i could care less about clothes, but i love my shoes and socks.

i refuse to wear plain socks and they never match.  heh.

I LOVE SHOES!!

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Zukene_Chic
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2 posted 2001-10-19 01:06 AM


Wow. What a chic thing to say. Eveyone needs to buy a pair of shoes every once in a while.
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2001-10-19 08:33 AM


This reminds of a Dr. Seuss story lol...I like shoes too but im not one of those crazy fanatic shoe buyers thank god...im like that w/t-shirts and if i was like that w/shoes  too my mom would kill me! Cool poem!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dark Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-19 09:47 AM


lol This is absolutely wonderful... I love coming across poems like this one. And how true!!! You can never have too many shoes. I'm living proof (and apparently so are you).
lol Thanks for the great read.

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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anonymousfemale
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5 posted 2001-10-20 05:51 AM


LOL
Very cool. I adore shoes too. There are just too many designers to think of and not enough time to buy them all!  

Thanks for the smile.  

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interupted.

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