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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2001-10-11 12:02 PM


    Pain
  On the outside I might look happy,
         but I'm not.
      It's all an act so I don't bother you,
    because you don't have time to deal with me.
  Plus I have no time I always have deal with you,
  and your problems that you swear are important.
         Why should I expect you to care,
        maybe I'm asking to much from you?
    But I can't always stay strong I'm sorry,
      I just wish you could understand that.
    I don't want you to see me cry or be weak,
        but I'm about to have a break down.
   Oh well you don't have to deal with it do you,
  even though I'll always be here to listen to you.


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1 posted 2001-10-11 12:05 PM


well I'm here, and I'll listen  
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2 posted 2001-10-11 12:06 PM


What is it, 'write about situations that get Rhonda right in the gut' night? Ouch. Um, I totally know where you're coming from on that one, so if you ever want someone to vent to about it, my email is
spacebear_15@hotmail.com
Way to get it out. I've been trying for months! Great read, into my library totally!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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3 posted 2001-10-11 01:54 PM


I've felt the same feelings your experiencing now...and they're extremely sucky feelings. If you ever need to talk you can e-mail me at xitalysbabyx@aol.com..i'll always be there to talk..i enjoyed ur poem but im sorry to hear that you are going through such pain..::hugs::
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4 posted 2001-10-11 03:24 PM


Heartfelt penned, hope that days will be better soon.

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-10-11 06:04 PM


Wow I totally see where you are coming from, sometimes poeple take advantage of you and it really sux.  Just be happy and smile  

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

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