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Seeing Through Blind Eyes
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Seeing Through Blind Eyes |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Set me on fire, Now I'm left with a spark. Shined sunlight on my face, But now I'm left in the dark. You kept me warm, Now I'm lost in the cold. Now I'm alone, With no one to hold. Calling out your name, Your face is everywhere. I'm reaching out for you, To find out your not there. I thought you really loved me, This feeling I cannot bare. I really did love you, But You don't even care. But I will go on, I will be strong. I wont cry anymore, For I didnt nothing wrong. You are missing out, On the greatness that is me. But your the one who has to reilise, I cannot make you see. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
WooWoo!! nice poem  Dang straight his missing out on the greatness that is you! btw, on this line: "For I didnt nothing wrong." Shouldn't it be did ?Nice write! Library! -Dreys Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
This is a lovely poem..very beautiful and sad at the same time...you hang in there girl!  |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem was wonderful!! At first when i was reading it it sounded like u were so alone and lost almost as if you've fallen and you didnt have the strength to get up..then i read these wonderful stanza's But I will go on, I will be strong. I wont cry anymore, For I didnt nothing wrong. You are missing out, On the greatness that is me. But your the one who has to reilise, I cannot make you see. Im proud that ur able to see that you did nothing wrong and that it's his loss and your gain...It takes a lotta strength to do that...great job! I aboslutely loved this poem! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I believe i know who you are  Well, the best thing to do is be strong He will find out what beauty he actually had i guess that's the hard way of finding out, and he will Keep your head up girl I'll always be here to talk to hi Sweets  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  [This message has been edited by acire (edited 10-11-2001).] |
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