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Teen Poetry #5

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aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2001-10-02 09:56 PM

Another class, another poem.  No wonder I have so much trouble in school.

               I look at you
                  and hope;
               that you feel
                  the way
                   I do.

            I dream of you and I
                  someday...

             running in the sand
              the waves lapping
                   at our
                    feet.

            I dream of you and I
                  someday...

              cuddled up together
                 arms entwined
                  by the camp
                     fire.

            I dream of you an I
                  someday...

              walking arm in arm
               down that aisle
                 together for
                    life.

                 Waking Up...
            I dream of you and I
                  someday...
            Because I've watched you
                   walk away.

Me thinks thats a bit lame.

Ex Animo,
    Aaron

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-03 08:09 AM

I think that sounds romantic! i hope your dream comes true someday...sounds absolutely wonderful

I wish i had more poems to write for school! Lucky.........

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

2 posted 2001-10-03 08:55 PM

Oh what a heart breaking end, but romantic all in all.

~Ali

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2001-10-03 09:49 PM

Hey, sounds like something out of my head... Have you been in there recently? Nah, you never would have come out of there alive! lol! It's a good poem, albeit short, Bit I've got no problem with that. Very romantic!

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

4 posted 2001-10-03 10:53 PM

Nice poem. I liked it alot, dunno, not much else to say but good write

I just like to encourage people with a great talent.

-Nathan

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