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Teen Poetry #5

Your Slipping away- dedicated

NathanS
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since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

0 posted 2001-10-01 12:03 PM

Well, i wrote this poem for my friend- cuz he and his girlfriend that were really close are soon going to be breaking up.

for reasons that are rather stupid... anyhow, heres the poem- concisder it me venting in my good friends frustration..

I feel like
Your slipping away
But i don't want it to happen
I want you to stay

You put these thoughts
Into my mind
These thoughts
of distrust
All to combine

How many nights
Would i go alone
How many nights
Would you remain unshown

A void torn open
My heart
ript, shattered, and broken

I feel like
Your slipping away
On, into another day

Even if i beg you to stay
It's to late,
Your slipping away

-Nathan

jenifeather
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 31
Here

1 posted 2001-10-01 12:08 PM

this is a sweet poem. i only hope your friends can express themselves as well as you do. love it.

jennifer

who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-10-01 12:08 PM

Wow... very sad poem I hope you can stay strong and get through this.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-10-01 11:06 AM

Well all good things must come to and end i guess...but remember that all things happen for a reason. If these two are truely meant to be they'll find their way back into eachothers arms.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-10-04 08:19 AM

Ditto to Shugar. Fate has a funny way of making dreams come true.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2001-10-04 08:31 PM

wow! i luved this soooo much, cuz i can soo relate 2 it....this rox....

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~i had a bad day again....

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

6 posted 2001-10-04 09:15 PM

hey i know this feeling
i loved the piece

"If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus

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