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Teen Poetry #5

Poem Without a Name

Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-09-28 12:07 PM

I wrote this after I attempted suicide, and thought that no one really... GOT me. So, dont wonder why its so dark.

Hold these
Hands that
Reach for
You...
Hear my
Whispering
Voice...
My blood...
Shall reach you...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 12:45 PM

well, I'm glad it didn't work

there are lots here who will "get" you, don't worry

Don't forget to review the guidelines for PiP

You say sooooo much in few words and to me that is a great writer

I look forward to more from you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-09-28 11:41 AM

Yea im glad that it didnt work as well!! I liked the poem though..single words can have so much impact..wonderful...

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