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Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

0 posted 2001-09-25 10:04 PM

evil, crime, pain, fights, death.
all friends of hate.
its powerful.
it takes the mind of others
and twist it all around.
it can cause jealousy.
with hate in my mind,
i see darkness and fires.
the darkness is from
all the people all over the world,
who is all out for themselves.
the fires are the destruction of mankind.

What is the problem?
Why do we have to have
all this pain and hurt?
How can we get rid of hatred?
It hurts! Make it stop!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
sssssssssssssshhhhhhhhh!
HATE!!!!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-09-25 11:51 PM

I like this one. I didn't get the impression that you were trying to make everything rhyme, and that's great! You were just getting your thoughts out, and your thoughts are very true. I commend you.
Rhonda

Mr T trusts me with coaching the Jr. Girls rugby team. What was he THINKING?!?!?!

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-09-26 10:36 AM

Oooh very emotional.

Well done.

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

Android 17

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since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-09-26 10:56 AM

Wow! I've never seen anything like it...it's authentic! I love it!!!

Then it comes to be that soothing light at the end of your tunnel...

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

4 posted 2001-09-26 06:36 PM

thanx people. but i didnt right this poem out of anger.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-27 04:51 AM

I hate society. really, I do so I can feel where you are coming from here even if the piece isn't out of anger. It simply expresses how frustrating their actions are.

Anyway, good work. Hope to see more soon.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

6 posted 2001-09-27 05:39 PM

thanx again for that complment i do understand y a lot of people hate the society and a lot of it relates to this poem i have written for people to read.

Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

7 posted 2001-09-28 12:10 PM

But you forget that without hate, there is no love. And what kind of hell would we live in with no love?

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