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aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2001-09-26 07:03 PM

Here's an old Favorite of mine. I have posted it somewhere on Piptalk before but that was so long ago I don't think anyone will care if I do so again.

Disappointment

I live my life for disappointment
feeling trapped on my endless circle
forever wishing once;
broken Thy pattern be
deeper and darker
each new shining moment becomes,
when only held each morning
my heart up to the rising sun
to watch it set on me.

Later.

Ex Animo,
AWood0813@charter.net

Raven Skye
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since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

1 posted 2001-09-26 08:57 PM

Welcome to pip. I'm Raven. I actually like this. heh

good job, hope to see you around more...

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-09-27 09:10 AM

Ahhhh I do feel this one. Nice job. You say you've been to PIP before? Was your name diff?

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-27 11:24 AM

Oh yes I know how this is. But there is nothing quite like disappointment

thanks for the read.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

4 posted 2001-09-27 12:29 PM

Ya about a year ago ( I think ) I posted a few poems around on various boards under the name AWood0813. Actually not too many on this board though. And I wasn't around much so that's why you don't recoginze the name.

Ex Animo,
AWood0813@charter.net

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

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Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-10-09 05:42 PM

very thought provoking
hope things do brighten up for you
thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-10-11 02:07 PM

Your words were strong and u really expressed yourself well..i can see why this is one of your favorites. Nice job and keep em comin!

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-10-24 05:25 PM

argue..i love to argue {i was readin ur critique message..}
but there aint nothin to argue about here!
i think ive read this befor enot sure but i found it again so yuh know..
Very nice!

"If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus

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