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LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

0 posted 2001-09-11 02:27 AM

Every waking second
pounds in my head
like a migraine you cant rid yourself of...
My life rushes towards me
flying at moch speed
only breaking now and then...

I am dictated by time
forever aging, ever dying
I grow older as I write this
to think this minute will never happen again...

Experiences are everything
Memories are tenfold more

When time seems to stop
and I know that always
I will hold this minute in my mind
I will take it to my grave

Although few and far between
these are the moments I live for...

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

[This message has been edited by LucidityNow (edited 09-11-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-11 09:47 PM

well done

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-09-12 01:31 AM

very well done! good work. it was well worded.
robin

Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-09-16 03:11 AM

"Experiences are everything
Memories are tenfold more"

Loved thoselines. Great job here.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-09-16 12:40 PM

The music I was listening to at the time of reading this really made this piece work for me. The last two lines, excellent. Simple yet so beautiful.

Thanks for the read. hope to see more.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

5 posted 2001-09-16 09:32 PM

are you new here? i dont think i know you...
nice write!

"Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!"
Travis Tritt

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

6 posted 2001-09-16 10:55 PM

Wow, I reallyreally like this one! thanks for sharing it with us.

hope to read more from you

Sarah

*the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made*
~jewel

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