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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-07-01 02:15 AM

this poem is a 2ed part to gaxing across the sea. i hope you like it.  there might be more to this searies

lost now knowing
       we float in the sea

like wonder full gulls
       i seek her she seeks me

we might be foolish
       led only by glee

but what they don't know
       what they can't see

they think it's blind but
       we set each other free

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

WHEN YOU LIVE, YOU DIE
WHEN YOU DIE, YOUR FORGOTTEN
AND WHEN YOUR FORGOTTEN

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-07-01 12:36 PM

this was great. i liked this alot.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall
Don't belong, Don't exist, Don't give a S***, Don't ever judge me -Slipknot

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-07-01 04:25 PM

This was a nice expansion of your earlier poem. Great job!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-07-01 06:48 PM

This was really cute! Great work

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-02 12:17 PM

Nice addition! I enjoyed this bunches, and hope to see more added on to the series. Very nice work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-03 07:14 PM

I liked this one. Good job here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-07-04 04:10 AM

enjoyed this one

...keep them coming.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-07 07:34 PM

this is a good read, hope to see more.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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